Everything around seemed to follow
an under-water pace. They were all just passing by Fabrice, even the
bumps were too slow to be felt. Like an endless swarm, the crowd was
never-ending. The faces looked the same, with a plastic smirk spread
over them. All the faces were somehow unnoticeable. Many had party
caps on their heads. Fabrice could feel a reminder sneaking at the
back of his mind, about the ongoing birthday celebration, which
happened to be his.
A pair of hands clenched his
shoulders guiding him through the crowded hall way. Fabrice could
sense, it was his Dad. Thinking about his Dad, made another
realization trickle in, this time reminding of the whiskey he had
smuggled in with a faithful accompanist and a good friend. Fabrice
could see back into time, and that familiar stare with which his dad
had looked at him, before he had fallen like a crippled man on the
couch. The party was ending now; this birthday had gone too far.
The view cleared out and there was a
certain degree of coolness in the air. The pair of hands reached
Fabrice’s head carefully leading him to the bed. Fabrice felt like
his perception was being treated by a “fast-forward” button and
when his realization caught up, the smiling face of his dad appeared
before his eyes. The view blurred continually before the eye lids
gave up and his consciousness sank in.
It felt like Fabrice had turned away
towards a different view. With eyes shut, still some things appeared
so clear. In an instant he went from lying down to sitting straight
up. There was a steering wheel right in front, and the interiors of a
car unraveled as if light was slowly progressing its way into the
entire view. A funny feeling in his stomach, told Fabrice that he was
falling.
‘What’s up with the slow mo?’
Fabrice felt funny that he could clearly think in this peculiar state
that wasn't real, but seemed a little too real to be a dream.
The pace returned as the car hit the
ground with a loud crash, Fabrice felt as if he would leap out like a dolphin due to the abrupt impact but his rib cage hit the steering
wheel. A faint pain shot up through his ribcage. Fabrice, hunched
towards the steering wheel, saw a clear “29” projected in the
skies.
‘This birthday had gone too
far’ he thought.
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...and so it begins again. Another attempt to weave a story. So jump in, hold on tight and let the ride take control.
Anyone after-thoughts are always welcomed, as it would reassure me that my shit is being read. Yep.
1 comment:
Your 'shit' has just been read. *clicks on Chapter 2*
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